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describe the place you want to work in the future.

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The world may change a lot over the next few years, but maybe the job I want to do will never change, which is to be a good and skilled engineer. Well, the place that I have always wanted to work in but have yet had the chance to visit is Tokyo, the capital city of Japan. I have been dreaming of working in this city ever since I learned about it from a travel and lifestyle channel. Of course, to do my job well, I need an ideal workspace that can meet all the needs in my work. I want my office to be as neat as possible with everything I need. I have the telephone next to the computer, which is in the center of my workbench with the monitor directly in front of me. The filing cabinet is between the printer and the photocopier so I can easily get the documents and copy them without tearing up the room. And a closet is for my coat when I go to work every day. I can’t leave out a small plant next to the window, it makes the air clear and comfortable.
The world may
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change
a lot over the
next
few years,
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but
maybe the job I want to do will never
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change
, which is to be a
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good
and skilled engineer. Well, the place that I have always wanted to work in
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but
have
yet
had the chance to visit is Tokyo, the capital city of Japan. I have been dreaming of working in this city ever since I learned about it from a travel and lifestyle channel.
Of course
, to do my job well, I need an ideal workspace that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
all the needs in my work. I want my office to be as neat as possible with everything I need. I have the telephone
next
to the computer, which is in the center of my workbench with the monitor
directly
in front of me. The filing cabinet is between the printer and the photocopier
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so
I can
easily
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get
the documents and copy them without tearing up the room. And a closet is for my coat when I go to work every day. I can’t
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leave
out a
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small
plant
next
to the window, it
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makes
the air
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clear
and comfortable.

IELTS essay describe the place you want to work in the future.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
194 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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