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the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns

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I quite agree with the opinion that the most important aspect of a job is the amount of money one earns because in today's life money is very important. People nowadays attach great importance to making money. Nowadays, having a lot of money leads to a high status, and without money, it is difficult to live. To get a perfect job, in addition to needing to fit yourself and society, how much money you make from that job is also very important.
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IELTS essay the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns

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  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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