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Describe the making of sugar from sugar cane as per the given image.

Describe the making of sugar from sugar cane as per the given image. lXGl9

The illustrations represent the process of sugar-making from scratch(sugarcane), highlighting the steps and layers to achieve sugar as the end product. Firstly, one has to grow sugarcane in their fields where the average period to achieve its full-growth is about 1 to 1. 5 years. Afterward, one can opt for either a machine-based harvest or choose the traditional method (by hand). Next, after the harvest, they are sent in to be crushed to gain their liquid form(juice) for further stages. This juice goes through a limestone filter for further purification. Then the purified liquid is converted into syrup through a method called evaporation. The second last step is centrifugation, where you separate the sugar crystals from the syrup. Finally, after drying and cooling, you get sugar as your final result. Overall, the methodology and stages of producing sugar can vary from person to person. If done right, the results will show all the hard work and energy one put into it.

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sugar
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end
 product.

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has to
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, after the harvest, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 in to be crushed
 to gain their liquid form(juice) for further
 stages. This juice goes through a limestone filter for further
 purification. Then the purified liquid is converted
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centrifugation
, where you separate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals from the syrup. Finally
, after drying and cooling, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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sugar
 as your final result.

Overall
, the methodology and stages of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 can vary from person to person. If done right, the results will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and energy one put into it. 