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what equipment do you like ?

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In the medicine, the stethoscope help medical staff to diagnose disease which seems the most important if you don’t have modern equipment. The stethoscope typically has one tubes connected to two earpieces and especially you can choose any colors which you want. The main structure is it help you to listen to the sounds of heart or lungs and more exactly than only listen by ears. I remember, I bought it when I was a new first year student, i really like it because it helps me to become like a doctor. So, the stethoscope is considered the symbol of the medicine which any medical staff has to have
In the medicine, the stethoscope
help
medical staff to diagnose disease which seems the most
important
if you don’t have modern equipment. The stethoscope
typically
has one tubes connected to two earpieces and
especially
you can choose any colors which you want. The main structure is it
help
you to listen to the sounds of heart or lungs and more exactly than
only
listen by ears. I remember, I
bought
it when I was a new
first
year student,
i
really
like it
because
it
helps
me to become like a doctor.
So
, the stethoscope
is considered
the symbol of the medicine which any medical staff
has to
have
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IELTS essay what equipment do you like ?

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