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In the medicine, the stethoscope help medical staff to diagnose disease which seems the most important if you don’t have modern equipment. The stethoscope typically has one tubes connected to two earpieces and especially you can choose any colors which you want. The main structure is it help you to listen to the sounds of heart or lungs and more exactly than only listen by ears. I remember, I bought it when I was a new first year student, i really like it because it helps me to become like a doctor. So, the stethoscope is considered the symbol of the medicine which any medical staff has to have

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IELTS essay what equipment do you like ?

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American English

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108 words

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