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Describe the first day of your school.

Describe the first day of your school. wBKo3
I have been to 3 schools. they are primary, high, and secondary school. and all they are different from each other. here i would like to talk about my senior secondary school which is situated at a village Leelan megh Singh, that is about to two kilometres from my housei was very nervous on my first day. the school is totally different from my high school. i remember that i was too much panic on my first day. i don't knew anyone here. so i enter the school, the school is very big and beautiful. i met a girl which help me to go to my class. co incidentally she was also in my class. she made me relax and comfortable. her name was pawandeep. from that to now she is still my best friend. That's all about my first day of school. which was so precious time for me.
I have been to 3
schools
.
they
are primary, high, and secondary
school
.
and
all they are
different
from each other.
here
i
would like to talk about my senior secondary
school
which
is situated
at a village
Leelan
megh
Singh,
that is
about to two
kilometres
from my
housei
was
very
nervous on my
first
day.
the
school
is
totally
different
from my high
school
.
i
remember that
i
was too much panic on my
first
day.
i
don't knew anyone here.
so
i
enter the
school
, the
school
is
very
big
and
beautiful
.
i
met a girl which
help
me to go to my
class
.
co
incidentally
she was
also
in my
class
.
she
made me relax and comfortable.
her
name was
pawandeep
.
from
that to
now
she is
still
my best friend. That's all about my
first
day of
school
.
which
was
so
precious time for me.
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IELTS essay Describe the first day of your school.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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