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Over the course of history, leadership roles have been dominated by male workers. It has been suggested that women are not suitable for these positions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Over the course of history, leadership roles have been dominated by male workers. It has been suggested that women are not suitable for these positions. 7aWXA
one of the ongoing debates regarding ( relating to ) gender equality is whether males or females are suitable for leadership roles, in my opinion, instead of gender, other criteria should be taken into consideration when selecting a leader On the one hand there are many reasons why female individuals are eligible for leadership positions. Compared to men, women have essential skill and potentials to become leaders, which have been highlighted by the increase of female leaders over the globe. despite family responsibilities, which have mostly been shouldered by females, woman today gradually make their mark in the community by holding top position in the society. the story of women in the story of covid 19 pandemic is the most obvious evidence when female leaders in countries such as, , , , , , , , actively respond to the thread of the virus, early implemented restrictions on social distance, which has been instrumental in flattening the curve On the one hand, women and men can occupy the same senior positions in the community. It is obvious that successful leaders need to possess good decision making ability, which can be performed well by both gender. on the top of that, whether a leader should be male or female need to be determined based on the leadership style required for each type of business as every gender has certain differences in the basis traits and qualities. a recent study has shown that women leader are likely to succeed in the field of medicine and healthcare while their male counterparts are often preferred in firms specializing in science and technology. In conclusion, both man and women are equally capable of holding the managing positions.
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one
of the ongoing debates regarding
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(
relating to
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)
gender equality is whether males or
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females
are suitable for leadership roles, in my opinion,
instead
of gender, other criteria should
be taken
into consideration when selecting a leader

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many
reasons why
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female
individuals are eligible for leadership
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positions
. Compared to
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men
,
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women
have essential
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skill
and potentials to become
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leaders
, which have
been highlighted
by the increase of
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female
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leaders
over the globe.
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despite
family responsibilities, which have
mostly
been shouldered
by
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females
, woman
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today
gradually
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make
their mark in the community by holding top
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position
in the society.
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the
story of
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women
in the story of
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covid 19
pandemic is the most obvious evidence when
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female
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leaders
in countries such as,
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,
,
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,
,
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,
,
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,
actively
respond to the thread of the virus, early implemented restrictions on social distance, which has been instrumental in flattening the
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curve


On the one hand,
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women
and
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men
can occupy the same senior
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positions
in the community. It is obvious that successful
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leaders
need to possess
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good
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decision making
ability, which can
be performed
well by both gender.
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on
the top of that, whether a
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leader
should be male or
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female
need to
be determined
based on the leadership style required for each type of business as every gender has certain differences in the basis traits and qualities.
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a
recent study has shown that
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women
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leader
are likely to succeed in the field of medicine and healthcare while their male counterparts are
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often
preferred in firms specializing in science and technology.

In conclusion
, both
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man
and
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women
are
equally
capable of holding the managing
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positions
.

IELTS essay Over the course of history, leadership roles have been dominated by male workers. It has been suggested that women are not suitable for these positions.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
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