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I believe the best thing that's free for me is music. That's right, you didn't get it wrong. Music is the melody, the sound that the musician wants to convey to the listener. Besides, music also reflects social issues, the author's story, or simply flowery words. sure, music is an integral part of my daily life, I listen to it every morning, on my way to school, or after stressful school hours, even while sleeping. Upbeat songs help me feel refreshed, fresh, and full of life for a new day. On the other hand, I also consider music as a spiritual medicine, when I'm happy I will listen to happy music, make my spirit comfortable, when I'm sad, the music will really act as a person. You are by my side to comfort me when I want to be alone. In addition, my close friends also have the same music genre as me, we like listening to English songs because it helps us practice our listening skills. Of course, if I want to listen to music, I have to pay for the internet.
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IELTS essay describe the best thing that is free for you

Essay
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1 paragraphs
183 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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