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Describe someone in your family who you like

Describe someone in your family who you like B7DxX

The person I like is my father, who I admire most. He is 50 years old. He is a farmer. He works very hard but he smiles all the time. Everybody likes him very much because he has a great sense of humor. My father and I have many similar hobbies. For example, watching TV, listening to music, and enjoying food made by my mother. I love my father because he is the person who I can rely on. In every aspect of my life, my father pushes me to excel. Whenever I feel discouraged, he always encourages me and tries to help me out. When I am with him, I’m not scared of anything. He always cares for every member of our family. He is a very good father as well as a wonderful husband. So, I do admire him.

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 pushes me to excel. Whenever I feel discouraged, he always encourages me and tries to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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as well
 as a wonderful husband. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I do admire him. 