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Describe Iphone 13 which you are given.

Describe Iphone 13 which you are given. 0wmBO

First and foremost, Iphone 13 is so portable and beautiful. Because it is lightweight, I can bring it everywhere if I want. Its design also made an impression on me a lot with the silver cover and an excellent OLED screen which is suitable for watching movies or playing the video game. In addition, the quality of camera and battery life are improved dramatically. I can take a great photo of my family or beautiful landscape.

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. I can take a great photo of my family or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
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 landscape. 