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Describe free time what do you do and when

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My hoppies are skincare about all my body and I do some exercise like walking in the garden and I sometimes go in gym because when I go in gym I challenge myself and give me a power. After that, I back in my home and I play with my son. Other hobbies, I love relaxing like drink some coffee and give me a lot of enjoying in my life and I like read about develop myself. In the holiday, I go outside with my sisters and talk together. The next holiday, I am going to the beach and I want to swimming with my sisters and enjoyable our time. Currently I don't have a lot of time because all of my time I study IELTS test I hope to get above of 6.
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hoppies
are skincare about all my body and I do
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some
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exercise
like walking in the garden and I
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sometimes
go in gym
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because
when I go in gym I challenge myself and give me a power. After that, I back in my home and I play with my son. Other hobbies, I
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love
relaxing like drink
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some
coffee and give me
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a lot of
enjoying in my life and I like read about develop myself. In the holiday, I go outside with my sisters and talk together. The
next
holiday, I am going to the beach and I want to
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swimming
with my sisters and enjoyable our time.
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Currently
I don't have
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a lot of
time
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because
all of my time I study IELTS
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test
I hope to
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get
above of 6.
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IELTS essay Describe free time what do you do and when

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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