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Describe describe an animal what it looks like when you saw it where you saw it explain why it is interesting

Describe describe an animal what it looks like when you saw it where you saw it explain why it is interesting kgNJ2
Well in my life I have seen many wild animals but here I would you like to talk about one particular animals which always be top of the list of my animals collection It’s look like a mammoth which was under the water and comes up on surface a pretty air the first time I have Some it in have seen it in national geography channel which is one of the leading channel in animation it is interesting it is interesting because the size of the animal is too big way compare in WATER I heard from the travellers that this animal is a friendly animal and also it can understand the feeling of human there are different type of colours pink black black week and see all over the world example in the oceans seas also where has pink is a really animal which we cannot see all over the places it can be particularly in one place of Atlantic Ocean only the traveller who guides me he’d give me a lot of information about the animal which is almost 150 m where female is 130 m it gives birth at a time to 20 to 30 babies I was shocked by listening the words of a guide because I had never heard that the animal which was under the water can give birth of this
Well in my life I have
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seen
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wild
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animals
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but
here I would you like to talk about one particular
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animals
which always be top of the list of my
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animals
collection It’s look like a mammoth which was under the water and
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comes
up on surface a pretty air the
first
time I have
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Some
it in
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have
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seen
it in national geography channel which is one of the leading channel in animation it is interesting it is interesting
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because
the size of the
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animal
is too
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big
way compare in WATER I heard from the
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travellers
that this
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animal
is a friendly
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animal
and
also
it can understand the feeling of human there are
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different
type of
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colours
pink
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black black
week and
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see
all over the world example in the oceans seas
also
where has pink is a
really
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animal
which we cannot
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see
all over the places it can be
particularly
in one place
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of Atlantic Ocean
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only
the
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traveller
who guides me he’d give me
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a lot of
information about the
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animal
which is almost 150 m where female is 130 m it gives birth at a time to 20 to 30 babies I
was shocked
by listening the words of a guide
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because
I had never heard that the
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animal
which was under the water can give birth of this
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IELTS essay Describe describe an animal what it looks like when you saw it where you saw it explain why it is interesting

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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