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Last week, I went to a new shop near my house where sold a lot of adorable things and cute souvenirs. And one of them which was the most colourful thing I think is my necklace. The reason why I made up my mind to choose it among other things is that it recall me some old memories. It a handmade necklace which had many pieces of flowers. Actually, I used to have one like that but I lost it when I was playing outside at my schoolyard. So when I see it, like lots of memories came to my mind. And my mom told me that it was really suitable for me. And when I wearing it and I can look myself in the mirror, it build confidence in me. And I really looked forward to shopping that store again. And my friends told me that they also want something like my necklace. And I really welcome to invite them to go with me.

Last week, I went to a new shop near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 where sold This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 adorable things and cute souvenirs. And one of them which was the most Possible spelling mistake. 'colourful' is British English.colorful
colourful
 thing I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 is my necklace. The reason why I made up my mind to choose it among other things is that it recall me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 memories.

It seems that a verb is missing after "It". Please verify.It isIt was
It
 a handmade necklace which had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 pieces of flowers.

Actually, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have one like that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I lost it when I was playing outside at my schoolyard. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it, like lots of memories came to my mind. And my mom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that it was really
 suitable for me. And when I wearing it and I can look myself in the mirror, it Did you mean "builds"?builds
build
 confidence in me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
And
 I really
 looked forward to shopping that store again. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
And
 my friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that they also
 want something like my necklace. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
And
 I really
 welcome to invite them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 me. 