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Describe an occasion you saw a lot of people smiling. what occasion it was where it was why they were smiling

Describe an occasion you saw a lot of people smiling. what occasion it was where it was why they were smiling 3xr1n

Some years ago I witnessed a very beautiful event. I was invited to my friend's wedding. Usually such crowded events make me fell more stressed than excited, but I really enjoyed this one. There were a lot of bride and groom's co-workers, relatives and friends. There were many people who had never seen each other before. What I vividly remember is whenever I looked, I saw smiling people. I think this is because smiling is contagious. When you see that someone smiles at you, even if you don't know the person, you can't help smiling back. I guess the main reason why everyone was smiling is that the atmosphere we really warm and everyone was in a good mood. As it was in the summer, they decided to have an outdoor wedding in the grounds of country restaurant. There was a nice spot by the lake, surrounded by woodland, and this is where a large tent was set. The venue was more than perfect. In my opinion, it was beautiful both outside and inside. So, the guests were genuinely happy, the ceremony was very beautiful, the bride was simply irresistible. At some point of the calebration we gathered together for a group shot, and we were all so happy that we had very broad smile on our faces. A bit later, the bride threw her wedding bouquet, and all single women competed in catching it as in our culture it believe that the girl who catches it will be the next to marry. You should have seen the one who caught it! She had a over the moon when she had catched. So everyone understood how happy she was.

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very
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beautiful
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event
. I was invited
 to my friend's wedding. Usually
 such crowded This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
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make
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but
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a lot of bride
 and groom's co-workers, relatives and friends. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
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seen
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before
.

What I vividly
 remember is whenever I looked, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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smiling
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people
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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because
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smiling
 is contagious. When you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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smiling
 back.

I guess the main reason why everyone was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmirklaughgrinbeam
smiling
 is that the atmosphere we really
 warm and everyone was in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 mood.

As it was in the summer, they decided to have an outdoor wedding in the grounds of country restaurant. There was a nice spot by the lake, surrounded by woodland, and this is where a large tent was set
. The venue was more than perfect. In my opinion, it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 both outside and inside.

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So
, the guests were genuinely
 happy, the ceremony was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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beautiful
, the bride was simply
 irresistible. At This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 point of the Possible spelling mistake found.celebrationcalibration
calebration
 we gathered together for a group shot, and we were all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy that we had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 broad smile on our faces. A bit later, the bride threw her wedding bouquet, and all single women competed in catching it as in our culture it Did you mean "believes"?believes
believe
 that the girl who catches it will be the next
 to marry. You should have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the one who caught it! She had Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 over the moon when she had Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "caught", the past tense form of the verb 'catch'?caughtcatchesmatchedwatchedcatcherhatched
catched
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 everyone understood how happy she was. 