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country big diffrent since you were a child

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Actually, I think my country has a big changed since I were a child. 10 years ago, cars were very rare, but now everyone has they own cars, some people have 2 to 3 of them. In recent years, more and more high-rise buildings have been built. In particular, the education level of the people is increasingly improved, the number of people who can speak foreign languages is also increasing. But, the environment is getting worse and worse because of the wastes from factories and vehicles.
Actually, I
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my country has a
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since I
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were
a child. 10 years ago, cars were
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very
rare,
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now
everyone has they
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own
cars,
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some
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people
have 2 to 3 of them. In recent years, more and more high-rise buildings have
been built
.
In particular
, the education level of the
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people
is
increasingly
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improved
, the number of
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people
who can speak foreign languages is
also
increasing.
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But
, the environment is getting worse and worse
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of the wastes from factories and vehicles.

IELTS essay country big diffrent since you were a child

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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