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Describe an item on which you spend more than expected.

Describe an item on which you spend more than expected. kjl1N
an item on which i spend more than expected. As everyone knows Foreo is a high-end brand that has been very familiar recently among skin care believers. Two years ago, I had a lot of acne. I'm really stressed, I buy a lot of skin care products. At that time, I thought that the reason I got acne was because of the cleansing step. That's why I decided to buy Foreo Luna 3. The time I asked my sister to book was on Black Friday and it was 30% off sale. Unfortunately my sister didn't remember to order the washing machine on black Friday and she ordered it more than two days late. Because of that, I had to spend a larger amount than I originally planned.
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spend more than
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is a high-
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brand that has been
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very
familiar recently among skin care believers. Two years ago, I had
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a lot of
acne. I'm
really
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stressed
, I
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buy
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a lot of
skin care products. At that time, I
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thought
that the reason I
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got
acne was
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because
of the cleansing step. That's why I decided to
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buy
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Foreo
Luna 3. The time I asked my sister to book was on Black Friday and it was 30% off sale. Unfortunately my sister didn't remember to order the washing machine on
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black Friday
and she ordered it more than two days late.
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of that, I had to spend a larger amount than I
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planned.

IELTS essay Describe an item on which you spend more than expected.

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127 words
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