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Describe an item on which you spend more than expected.

Describe an item on which you spend more than expected. kjl1N

an item on which i spend more than expected. As everyone knows Foreo is a high-end brand that has been very familiar recently among skin care believers. Two years ago, I had a lot of acne. I'm really stressed, I buy a lot of skin care products. At that time, I thought that the reason I got acne was because of the cleansing step. That's why I decided to buy Foreo Luna 3. The time I asked my sister to book was on Black Friday and it was 30% off sale. Unfortunately my sister didn't remember to order the washing machine on black Friday and she ordered it more than two days late. Because of that, I had to spend a larger amount than I originally planned.

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 spend more than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 everyone knows Possible spelling mistake found.ForeForgoForegoOreoForesFore o
Foreo
 is a high-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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very
 familiar recently among skin care believers. Two years ago, I had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 acne. I'm really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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a lot of
 skin care products. At that time, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that the reason I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 acne was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the cleansing step. That's why I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
Possible spelling mistake found.ForeForgoForegoOreoForesFore o
Foreo
 Luna 3. The time I asked my sister to book was on Black Friday and it was 30% off sale. Unfortunately my sister didn't remember to order the washing machine on If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Black Friday
black Friday
 and she ordered it more than two days late. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of that, I had to spend a larger amount than I originally
 planned. 