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Describe an important festival in your country. When is is? What do people do then?

Describe an important festival in your country. When is is? What do people do then? e8wKW

It is about big festival in my State, it is all time Government and citizen celebrate independent day in seventeen August, a lot of games and interesting prize present to welcome big event. firstly in my state, their made big event for celebrate Independent day with their habit annual year event, however more people come to my state for join with us enjoy it is, also government made more gift for citizen it is time for met much people and we can interaction white their, do not forget white arties come to liven up the event and usually have history exhibition

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event
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firstly
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big
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event
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event
, however
 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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come
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join
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government
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come
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event
 and usually
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