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Describe an important conversation that you had with someone.

Describe an important conversation that you had with someone. o5M0w
One of the most important conversations for me is my future-oriented conversation. It happened about 3 years ago. My father called me to sit next to him to talk about the university I wanted to go to and the career I wanted to do. But I don't have any direction for my future so I don't really like or stand out too much in a certain subject. That means I'm really confused. So I told him I don't know. Then he asked me with a gentle line if you would like to be free. The question made me think for a while. Then he said that if you want to be free, you have to be self-sufficient. And he gave me many examples and especially examples of his life. Since then, he helped me realize that learning is the fastest way to help me become self-sufficient and free. The conversation seemed lighthearted, but it changed my mind and made me never forget. Because without that conversation I would not have been able to choose a major that I love and would not be able to work as hard with my studies as I do now.
One of the most
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for me is my future-oriented
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. It happened about 3 years ago. My father called me to sit
next
to him to talk about the university I wanted to go to and the career I wanted to do.
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But
I don't have any direction for my future
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so
I don't
really
like or stand out too much in a certain subject. That means I'm
really
confused.
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So
I
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told
him I don't know. Then he asked me with a gentle line if you would like to be free. The question made me
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think
for a while. Then he said that if you want to be free, you
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have to
be self-sufficient. And he gave me
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many
examples and
especially
examples of his life. Since then, he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me realize that learning is the fastest way to
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help
me become self-sufficient and free. The
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conversation
seemed lighthearted,
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but
it
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changed
my mind and made me never forget.
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Because
without that
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conversation
I would not have been able to choose a major that I
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love
and would not be able to work as
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hard
with my studies as I do
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IELTS essay Describe an important conversation that you had with someone.

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  American English
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