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Difficulties which you had to face

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Sooner or later, irrespective of age or gender, there has been times when all of us to realise role of education in today 's world. Just as how beautiful sprouting tree is, so is person with adorement called education. Great deal of challenged filled period of my life happened in 2017 in my early 17-th. Whenever I look that chapter of my life, I see aimless "me" wandering at paths of life as if in high in the sky, when groupmates of mine ware eagerly preparing to University entering exam. I have a vivid picture of being used to be a dismal failure at that time. I do not even know whether it was basicly driven from my imcompetence in curriculum or personal character and attitude to life. Back then, to some extend, I assured myself, not to move forward, not to change anything. However it was only motive to avoid from ardious life, uncertainity and hardships followed by new changes and resolutions. So I think, that is way I created a bubble to protect myself from reality, to prove myself being "right". Instead of working hard, I had prefered to relax and forget about anything to some time. There were two choices. The first was to continue with that manner and feel relaxed. The second was to step out of comfort zone, studying with all effort to find my role in society, to become someone who will be able to create future rules. As I am writing this letter my choice was the latter. Admittidly, there were the flock of questions with hesitation about my abilities. It has been everlasting experience as I eventually decided to dedicate 16-20 hour a day to studying. Years gone by, I have managed to enter University, learned bunch of languages (English B2, Japanes N3, Spanish A2, Russian B2, to some extent toki pono, esperanto (self-study)), give up learning math to focused on accounting and audit. That peroid was for exponential changes which crated opportunity to re-establesh mysrsf as a person, to find myself. Later my endeavor created chain reaction inspiring two people towards their goals, help them to find their path.
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is person with
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adorement
called education.

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happened in 2017 in my early 17-th. Whenever I look that chapter of my
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, I
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aimless
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wandering at paths of
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as if in high in the sky, when
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groupmates
of mine ware
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preparing to University entering exam. I have a vivid picture of being
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used
to be a dismal failure at that time. I do not even know whether it was
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basicly
driven from my
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imcompetence
in curriculum or personal character and attitude to
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life
. Back then, to
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, I assured myself, not to
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forward, not to
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anything.
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motive to avoid from
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,
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uncertainity
and hardships followed by new
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changes
and resolutions.
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I
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,
that is
way I created a bubble to protect myself from reality, to prove myself being
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right
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.
Instead
of working
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to relax and forget about anything to
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There were two choices. The
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I am writing this letter my choice was the latter.
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Admittidly
, there were the flock of questions with hesitation about my abilities. It has been everlasting experience as I
eventually
decided to dedicate 16-20 hour a day to studying. Years gone by, I have managed to enter University, learned bunch of languages (English B2,
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Japanes
N3, Spanish A2, Russian B2, to
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extent
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toki
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pono
,
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esperanto
(self-study)), give up learning math to focused on accounting and audit.

That
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was for exponential
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changes
which crated opportunity to
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re-establesh
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mysrsf
as a person, to find myself. Later my endeavor created chain reaction inspiring two
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people
towards their goals,
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help them to find
their path.
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IELTS essay Difficulties which you had to face

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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