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Describe an aim or goal that you hope to achieve in the future. You should say: what the aim is when you hope to achieve it what you need to do to reach your goal and why this goal is important to you.

Describe an aim or goal that you hope to achieve in the future. You should say: what the aim is when you hope to achieve it what you need to do to reach your goal and why this goal is important to you. yD9Pg
I wanted to be an English teacher when 5th grade. I had to learn English before that and the ability for my English was considered so well. At that time, I attempted to study more seriously to invest in the future. I have learned by myself, by the teacher in class. Besides that, I also watched a lot of videos from Khanh Vy, Giang Oi, … They have English languages variety and I very admire them. In addition, social media is more regular-developing. English is one of the universal languages and learning English proficiently helps us many changes about the future job and the salary stable. I always consider English as my soulmate to accompany me every single day for myself to be successful in my life because it is a very important role on the way to set goals.
I wanted to be an English teacher when 5th grade. I had to learn English
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before
that and the ability for my English
was considered
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so
well. At that time, I attempted to study more
seriously
to invest in the future. I have learned by myself, by the teacher in
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class
.
Besides
that, I
also
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watched
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a lot of
videos from
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Khanh
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Vy
,
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Giang
Oi, … They have English languages variety and I
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very
admire them.
In addition
, social media is more regular-developing. English is one of the universal languages and learning English
proficiently
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helps
us
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many
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changes
about the future job and the salary stable. I always consider English as my soulmate to accompany me every single day for myself to be successful in my life
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because
it is a
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very
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important
role on the way to set goals.
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IELTS essay Describe an aim or goal that you hope to achieve in the future. You should say: what the aim is when you hope to achieve it what you need to do to reach your goal and why this goal is important to you.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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