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Describe an activity you usually do that wastes your time

Describe an activity you usually do that wastes your time BW0Kp
Go hand in hand with the development of social network, people have become more and more dependent on using social media. When I have free time, I will use my smartphone or laptop to surf Facebook, chat with friends on Messenger, … all day. Therefore, I think using social media is one of my bad habits that wastes my time. The fact is that I am quite active on social media. I can spend all a whole day using Facebook and Messenger to update news and interact with my friends. Lately, Facebook has had a new feature that users can watch a lot of videos with different topics. Therefore, when I open Facebook, my newsfeed will show up a bunch of videos that I concern. I kill time again. But sometimes, I feel I waste too much time on this. I neglected my studies to entertain, and I had many useless days. I feel very bad because now I am kind of addicted to using social media. I can utilize this time more productively than I waste here unduly.
Go hand in hand with the development of
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social
network,
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people
have become more and more dependent on using
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social
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media
. When I have free
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time
, I will
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use
my smartphone or laptop to surf Facebook, chat with friends on Messenger, … all day.
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, I
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think
using
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social
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media
is one of my
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bad
habits that wastes my
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time
. The fact is that I am quite active on
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social
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media
. I can spend all a whole day using Facebook and Messenger to update news and interact with my friends. Lately, Facebook has had a new feature that users can
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watch
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a lot of
videos with
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different
topics.
Therefore
, when I open Facebook, my newsfeed will
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show
up a bunch of videos that I concern. I kill
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time
again.
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But
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sometimes
, I feel I waste too much
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time
on this. I neglected my studies to entertain, and I had
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many
useless days. I feel
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very
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bad
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because
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now
I am kind of addicted to using
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social
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media
.
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I
can utilize this
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time
more
productively
than I waste here
unduly
.
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IELTS essay Describe an activity you usually do that wastes your time

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