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Inspite of health warning, a huge public start to smoke all around the globe. Which is incrrasing pollution in our environment as well diseases such as cancer, lungs isuues and breathewe should b a part of that campaign where we can aware the public in order to get rid off from this addiction. How could we reduce the usage of cigarette for saving our young generation. As we heard health is wealth, we should take away from these type of drugs. Although alcohol and other type of drugs are more dangerous but tobacco is also harmful as scientists researched. It can be the cause of cancer, lungs and affected to another parts of the body. The smoke of cigarette distub people in public place. Government should provide seprate areas for smoking as given in other countries on order to prevent usage in that type of places where family and friends stay or get together. While, government should emboss tax in order to make it expensive which will not affordable for everyone and a bunch of people will leave it. The another criteria can be this we should aware public and tell all the disadvantages to people how does it make you ill as well unhealthy. To sum up, the government should take step against smokers who smokes in public areas. It should be banned in our country to make free from this drug to our child and adults

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Inspite
 of health warning, a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
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start
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incrrasing
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isuues
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breathewe
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public
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get
 rid Did you mean "of" ('get rid of' = 'discard' or 'get free of')?of
off
 from this addiction. How could we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the usage of cigarette for saving our young generation.

As we heard health is wealth, we should take away from these type of drugs. Although alcohol and other type of drugs are more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
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but
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affected
 to another parts of the body. The smoke of cigarette Possible spelling mistake found.disturbdis tub
distub
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 place. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
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seprate
 areas for smoking as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 in other countries on order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
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get
 together.

While, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should emboss tax in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it expensive which will not affordable for everyone and a bunch of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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leave
 it. The another criteria can be this we It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.should be awareshould have aware
should aware
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public
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 all the disadvantages to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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make
 you ill as well
 unhealthy.

To sum up, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should take step against smokers who Did you mean "smoke"? Alternatively, check whether the singular of 'smokers' should be used.smoke
smokes
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 areas. It should be banned
 in our country to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 free from this drug to our child and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphadults.adults!adults?adults:adults,adults;
adults