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Thanks to the development of technology, online sales are increasingly popular. In my opinion, this trend brings many benefits. Especially at a time when the Covid-19 epidemic is still raging, everyone is forced to stay at home and isolate from society. They began to prefer online shopping with a wide variety of items and quick ordering on many application. Two applications that are no longer unfamiliar to us are lazada and shopee. When we want to make a purchase, we only need to perform simple operations such as adding the item we want to buy to the cart and then checkout, we can also choose many delivery methods.

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purchase
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IELTS essay Describe a trend that you interested

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

108 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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