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Describe a time you were tired but have to stay awake

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I think there have been quite a number of such instance, but one that comes to mind is a time I had to win a place at university. Sometimes I have difficulty getting to stay up late when I do my homework completely. Stay awake after 10 p. m. is usually quite a challenge, however, I was under an enormous amount of pressure so that I had to pull an all-nighter. Because I could barely hold my eyes open, I picked coffee, the drink that seemed like it would have the best choice of keeping me alert during the lesson. There worse was a tiring time but I'm really into it because of some reasons. Because of my effort, I got through an examination with flying colors. Besides, I gained a lot of experiences when I did some revision. It is an unforgettable memory in my life.
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one that
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to mind is a time I had to win a place at university.

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Sometimes
I have difficulty getting to stay up late when I do my homework completely. Stay awake after 10 p. m. is
usually
quite a challenge,
however
, I was under an enormous amount of pressure
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so
that I had to pull an all-nighter.
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Because
I could
barely
hold my eyes open, I picked coffee, the drink that seemed like it would have the best choice of keeping me alert during the lesson.

There worse was a tiring time
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but
I'm
really
into it
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because
of
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some
reasons.
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Because
of my effort, I
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got
through an examination with flying colors.
Besides
, I gained
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a lot of
experiences when I did
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some
revision.

It is an unforgettable memory in my life.

IELTS essay Describe a time you were tired but have to stay awake

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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