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Describe a time when you were really close to wild animal

Well, I really fond of knowing about the animals. weather, it is domestic or wild animals. Here I would like to talk about a animal that I experienced from so closely, I vividly remember that when, I was visited a zoo with my parents about two years ago, in summer vocation. The name of the animal is elephant. It is very large in size. It has hidden tooth with two tusk. Moreover it has also a long trunk. Elephant can eat vegetables and bananas. they also drink water with their trunk along with this they have a friendly nature, they showering water with each other to play. The guider of the zoo told all about the elephant that they are more powerful than others animals. I like this animal because they look innocent and many people of India worship the elephant as they are symbol of lord Ganesha. It was fascinating experience for me, that I would never forget forever

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fond
 of knowing about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
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weather
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animals
. Here I would like to talk about Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.an
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animal
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closely
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animal
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboar
elephant
. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.large
large in size
. It has hidden tooth with two Possible agreement error. The noun ‘tusk’ seems to be countable, so consider using: “tusks”.tusks
tusk
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
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 a long trunk. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboar
Elephant
 can eat vegetables and bananas. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.They
they
also
 drink water with their trunk along with this they have a friendly nature, A verb seems to be missing. Did you mean “they’re showering”, “they are showering”, or “they were showering”?they're showeringthey are showeringthey were showering
they showering
 water with each other to play. The guider of the zoo This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 all about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboar
elephant
 that they are more powerful than others You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. I like this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
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because
 they look innocent and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of India worship the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboar
elephant
 as they are Consider using either the past participle “symboled”, “symbolled” or the present participle “symboling”, “symbolling” here.symboledsymbolledsymbolingsymbolling
symbol
 of lord Ganesha. It was fascinating experience for me, that I would never forget Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.forever.forever!forever?forever:forever,forever;
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