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Describe a time when you wasted a lot of time

Goodbye to talk about the time when I wasted a lot of time last month my brother is a marriage and my mum had to go for the marriage in the evening my mum said to me that bring my dress from the tailor when I using my phone on played some games I said to my mum that don't worried about her dress I kept from the tailor but suddenly my my friend call me I surprised because she called me on an unknown number I feel very happy and I share this news with my all friends after that I prepared some prepared list about famous places which we visited I forgot my mom's dress to get from the the tailor but my mum came and shouting on me and telling me that where is my dress after that I go I rushed to the towards our shop but unfortunately the shop was closed that time I feel worried about my mum dress when I came my mum angry on me but fortunately the tailor give to the dress the tailor gives dress to the my my father and my mum feel very happy but disappointing with me so that was the time when I wasted a lot of time in even my friend came after 3 days
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when I wasted
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last month my brother is a marriage and my
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mum
had to go for the marriage in the evening my
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mum
said to me that bring my
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dress
from the tailor when I using my phone on played
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some
games I said to my
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mum
that don't worried about her
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dress
I
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kept
from the tailor
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but
suddenly
my my friend call me I surprised
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because
she called me on an unknown number I feel
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very
happy and I share this news with my all friends after that I prepared
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some
prepared list about
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famous
places which we visited I forgot my mom's
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dress
to
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get
from the the tailor
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but
my
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mum
came and shouting on me and telling me that where is my
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dress
after that I go I rushed to the towards our shop
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but
unfortunately the shop
was closed
that
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time
I feel worried about my
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mum
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dress
when I came my
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mum
angry on me
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but
fortunately
the tailor give to the
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dress
the tailor gives
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dress
to the my my father and my
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mum
feel
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very
happy
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but
disappointing with me
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that was the
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time
when I wasted
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a lot of
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in even my friend came after 3 days
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you wasted a lot of time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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