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Describe a time when you wasted a lot of time

Here I would like to talk about a time when I wasted a lot of time last month my brother's marriage in our neighbourhood and my mum my mother had to go for the marriage in the evening my mum said to me that please bring my dress from the tailor and when I used my phone and played some games after that my mum I was go and suddenly my phone Rang and I was surprising when I came to know that she is my childhood friend I feel very happy and she e come from Canada in India and she tell me that she wants to visit famous places suddenly my mum came and angry on me that where is her dress I rushed towards the the shop unfortunately I saw the shop was closed in the evening and I feel very bad and I also worried because my mum shouting on me e my father came and bring my mom's dress from the tailor and my mum feels happy but disappoint with me so that was the time when I wasted a lot of time even my friend came to after 3 days but I prepared list so that list can be e made after
Here I would like to talk about a
time
when I wasted
a lot of
time
last month my brother's marriage in our neighbourhood and my
mum
my mother had to go for the marriage in the evening my
mum
said to me that
please
bring my dress from the tailor and when I
used
my phone and played
some
games after that my
mum
I was go and
suddenly
my phone Rang and I was surprising when I
came
to know that she is my childhood friend I feel
very
happy and she e
come
from Canada in India and she
tell
me that she wants to visit
famous
places
suddenly
my
mum
came
and angry on me that where is her dress I rushed towards the the shop unfortunately I
saw
the shop
was closed
in the evening and I feel
very
bad
and I
also
worried
because
my
mum
shouting on me e my father
came
and bring my mom's dress from the tailor and my
mum
feels happy
but
disappoint with me
so
that was the
time
when I wasted
a lot of
time
even my friend
came
to after 3 days
but
I prepared list
so
that list can be e made after
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you wasted a lot of time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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