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Describe a time when you promise someone

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Nowadays many people promise to someone as according to their desire here I would like to talk about my experience when I promised to someone and unfortunately I can't do it I promise with my one of closest friend her name is in the pit goggle I promise han to to come the college at the sharp 9 a. m. but unfortunately I cannot go there and I cannot complete my promise I made this promise because we have to prepare assignment on the particular topic so we have to meet together for the preparation of the assignment and we decided the time to make the assignment but unfortunately I cannot complete it I think it's very on the situation sometime we make the promise according in the time but then we want to complete it then we can't do it so according to me promise is really difficult task to complete it so this was a time when I made the promise to someone but I cannot complete it and I really felt bad after that.
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to someone as according to their desire here I would like to talk about my experience when I promised to someone and unfortunately I can't do it I
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with my one of
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the college at the sharp 9 a. m.
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prepare assignment on the particular topic
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we
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together for the preparation of the
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assignment and
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unfortunately I cannot
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then we want to
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this was a time when I made the
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you promise someone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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