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A group of British student would like to go camping in your area. The group leader has asked you to write a report including the following information. . the best place to camp in your are , and why . the best time of year for camping there . what clothes the group members should bring with them

A group of British student would like to go camping in your area. The group leader has asked you to write a report including the following information. . the best place to camp in your are, and why. the best time of year for camping there. what clothes the group members should bring with them r1D2o

The main aim of this report is to present information about local-camping places, visitors comments, trends, and recommendations to improve this facility. To prepare for this report, I visited two of the most popular camps and asked people's opinions of the service. There are a number of modern camps in the area which serve meals for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Some of them have a wonderful opportunity for people and swimming pool, air theatre and exciting view of the environment. And the camps are popular among people of different ages groups. It was reported that in recent years most of the camps had extended their days, with most open until autumn. According to the people’s opinion, there concerns which should be taken into consideration. Firstly, prices are too high compared to the other nearly camps. Consequently, there are no many visitors and an unpleasant environment. Secondly, almost all the meal and services presented on the menu are not free. As a result, they are not available for teenagers. Taking all the factors mentioned into account, I would recommend the following steps to progress the state. By reducing prices, the camps are expected to have more clients. It would be better if you will camping in the summer there. Because in summer views can be wonderful. And visitors can bring summer and autumn clothes. As soon as the weather can be changeable. If these recommendations are implemented the current undesirable issue is bound to improve.

The main aim of this report is to present information about local-camping places, visitors comments, trends, and recommendations to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 this facility. To prepare for this report, I visited two of the most popular camps and asked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's opinions of the service.

There are a number of modern camps in the area which serve meals for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of them have a wonderful opportunity for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and swimming pool, air Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 and exciting view of the environment. And the camps are popular among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 ages groups.

It was reported
 that in recent years most of the camps had extended their days, with most open until autumn.

According to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s opinion, there concerns which should be taken
 into consideration.

Firstly
, prices are too high compared to the other nearly
 camps.

Consequently
, there are Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 visitors and an unpleasant environment.

Secondly
, almost all the meal and services presented on the menu are not free.

As a result
, they are not available for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
.

Taking all the factors mentioned into account, I would recommend the following steps to progress the state. By reducing prices, the camps are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to have more clients. It would be better if you will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "camp"camp
camping
 in the summer there. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 in summer views can be wonderful. And visitors can bring summer and autumn clothes. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the weather can be changeable.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 these recommendations are implemented
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 undesirable issue is bound
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
. 