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My favorite subject is English because of several reasons. The most important reason I like this subject is that it is a core subject which is necessary in my career path. Itry to learn this language well so that I can communicate with foreigners and find a good job in the future. Furthermore, learning English wel can help me read books or magazines in English. Through reading things in English, I can ne exposed to various cultures and customs. Besides, my English teacher is a dedicated person who can engage me in her lessons and bring the passion for me. I find her lessons interesting because she delivers them in a way that I really like. In short, English is an important subject which I am reaaly keen on.
My favorite
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is English
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reason I like this
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is that it is a core
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which is necessary in my career path.
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to learn this language well
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that I can communicate with foreigners and find a
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me read books or magazines in English. Through reading things in English, I can
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exposed to various cultures and customs.
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, my English teacher is a dedicated person who can engage me in her lessons and bring the passion for me. I find her lessons interesting
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because
she delivers them in a way that I
really
like. In short, English is an
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important
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which I am
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IELTS essay Describe a subject you like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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