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Describe a sports event that you watch or took part in

Describe a sports event that you watch or took part in 7rmx6
Football is a very popular game. Whenever I watch it on Television, I get overjoyed. The other day I witnessed a football match between the Vietnam team – Uzbekistan teams in Changzhou, China. The game starts at 3 pm amid heavy snow despite earlier news that weather conditions might threaten to delay the match, but the Vietnam team still remarkable in the official red color. I have three reasons that when I remember it, I’m always walking on air. Firstly, Quang Hai’s kick, his goal was called “rainbow in the snow”. Secondly, entering the final game of an Asian championship is the best achievement in the football history of Vietnam as well as Southeast Asia. The most important is the solidarity of the Vietnam national team. Although they were loose, they do not give to keep our heads down because they have tried their best. All the global fans in general and Vietnamese fans in particular, they have been the champions.
Football is a
very
popular game. Whenever I
watch
it on Television, I
get
overjoyed. The other day I witnessed a football match between the Vietnam
team
Uzbekistan
teams
in
Changzhou
, China.

The game
starts
at 3 pm amid heavy snow despite earlier news that weather conditions might threaten to delay the match,
but
the Vietnam
team
still
remarkable in the official red color. I have three reasons that when I remember it, I’m always walking on air.
Firstly
,
Quang
Hai
’s kick, his goal
was called
“rainbow in the snow”.
Secondly
, entering the final game of an Asian championship is the best achievement in the football history of Vietnam
as well
as Southeast Asia. The most
important
is the solidarity of the Vietnam national
team
. Although they were loose, they do not give to
keep
our heads down
because
they have tried their best.

All the global fans
in general
and Vietnamese fans
in particular
, they have been the champions.
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IELTS essay Describe a sports event that you watch or took part in

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3 paragraphs
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