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Describe a sport thật you would like to try

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It's swimming. Unlike other sports, it doesn't need to think or use too much strength. It just needs to drop into the water and feel it. To learn it, we need to equip a few things such as: a swimming pool large enough to swim, goggles to protect our eyes, a swimming cap and finally a swimsuit if needed. How to be able to swim. As you know, first we need to know how to float on water. And then we learn other swimming skills. It's interesting when the cake has swimming. Swimming also helps us stronger and taller
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to drop into the water and feel it. To learn it, we
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to equip a few things such as: a swimming pool large
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to swim, goggles to protect our eyes, a swimming cap and
finally
a swimsuit if needed. How to be able to swim. As you know,
first
we
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need
to know how to float on water. And then we learn other swimming
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. It's interesting when the cake has swimming. Swimming
also
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us stronger and
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taller
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IELTS essay Describe a sport thật you would like to try

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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