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Describe a special gift that you have given to someone that was brought from your recent travel. Please say- What was it? - Where was the gift brought from? - Whom did you give it to? - Did he/she like it? v.1

Describe a special gift that you have given to someone that was brought from your recent travel. Please say- What was it? - Where was the gift brought from? - Whom did you give it to? - Did he/she like it? v. 1
These days, the internet then is useful for all ages then gather more knowledge. What is the most effective method for dealing with damaging social skills of a teenager and young adults? Some people think that it depends upon age to follow the rule of society. Thus, sometimes it is dangerous or safety the social development of the website. Let's begin by looking at the problem with the online network around the world using humans. There is a website facing money, video games, etc. Furthermore, Imagination kills different sites than do not remember for a long time. For example, students are working with sites than it did not have moral values and how to behave with other people. Presently, it has the participation of the internet rather than does not lesson any motivational words in the persons. There are looking for cash to improve the stability of life than it is not a realization. Secondly, the server does not problem occurs the development of juveniles from using safe borrowers. Moreover, some of the sites have not been hacked in evolution than it is a technology. For instance, Google is one of the most users are using in my country. This app needs to override some activities like ads on YouTube of such as videos. In conclusion, although it is a common belief that the server is taking care of destroying the skills of adolescents. I believe that develop safety browsers of youths. I think of danger in this way for creative ideas.
These days, the internet then is useful for all ages then gather more knowledge. What is the most effective method for dealing with damaging social
skills
of a
teenager
and young adults?
Some
people
think
that it depends upon age to follow the
rule
of society.
Thus
,
sometimes
it is
dangerous
or safety the social development of the website.

Let
's
begin
by looking at the problem with the online network around the world using humans. There is a website facing money, video games, etc.
Furthermore
, Imagination kills
different
sites than do not remember for a long time.
For example
, students are working with sites than it did not have moral values and how to behave with other
people
.

Presently
, it has the participation of the internet
rather
than does not lesson any motivational words in the persons. There are looking for cash to
improve
the stability of life than it is not a realization.

Secondly
, the server does not problem occurs the development of juveniles from using safe borrowers.
Moreover
,
some of the
sites have not
been hacked
in evolution than it is a technology.
For instance
, Google is one of the most users are using in my country. This app needs to override
some
activities like ads on YouTube of such as videos.

In conclusion
, although it is a common belief that the server is taking care of destroying the
skills
of adolescents. I believe that develop safety browsers of youths. I
think
of
danger
in this way for creative
ideas
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe a special gift that you have given to someone that was brought from your recent travel. Please say- What was it? - Where was the gift brought from? - Whom did you give it to? - Did he/she like it? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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