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Describe a skill u want to improve.

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Well, all people have born with different abilities like dancing, singing and I also have plenty of talents which I want to improve. However, here I am going to talk about a skill which I want to improve in my future. Actually, it is music. I love to sing and listen music in my free time. Moreover, I discovered this skill when I was in 10th class. I remember, in my school was held singing competition and my mentor write down my name in this competition. But I did not agree with her as I thought I was not good in music. She forced me and told me your voice is so melodious. So I said yes and took part in competition. On that day may friends boosted my confidence and were clapping for me. As a result, I got a first position in that competition. I was over the moon and got prize. Then, I realized that I am good in singing and I should have improve my music skills. So you know, there are many music industries in India and I also want to join one of them for my music practice. Because I want to sing at professional level and earn huge money on based of my skill. So that is the skill which I want to improve.
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skill
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want
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improve
in my future. Actually, it is
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music
. I
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love
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music
in my free time.
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skill
when I was in 10th
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was held
singing
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competition
and my mentor write down my name in this
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competition
.
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music
. She forced me and
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told
me your voice is
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so
melodious.
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I said yes and
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took part
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competition
. On that day may friends boosted my confidence and were clapping for me.
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, I
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position in that
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competition
. I was over the moon and
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got
prize. Then, I realized that I am
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and I should have
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improve
my
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music
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.
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you know, there are
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music
industries in India and I
also
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want
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join
one of them for my
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music
practice.
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I
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want
to sing at professional level and earn huge money on based of my
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IELTS essay Describe a skill u want to improve.

Essay
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