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Describe a skill that you learned from older people.

Describe a skill that you learned from older people. XoxgO
Well there are a lot of skills which I want to learn like cooking and many more which helps me in several difficult situations and here I would like to talk about one of the skill which I learnt from my uncle and Skill is driving, some moments when I faced difficulty in rainy days and due to that i always choose bus in these days, i don't like to travel by public transport because of sofugation so that's why I want to learn about this skills so i can go anywhere regardless weather conditions and I remember that when I have completed my graduation, I search several driving Institution and enquiry there for driving but due to covid-19 day all driving school were closed for uncertain time period and after that I came back to home and discuss about it with my parents and they suggest me one of my uncle Mr Jagdish, he is an Army person and after retirement he most of time spent in a ground where he give free coaching to poor Childrens and and then I ask him to teach me driving and he he get ready for this and next day I went with them in the playground which was nearest to my home and his car is looking very good and clean. He started with about some basic things about the car how to start and which gear is useful for which situation and usage of Mirrors and then I start the car and he are told me step by step and I follow as they teach me and every morning i continue this routine and couple of months after I was very good in driving and one day he took me in a public place for that but in this area i felt very nervous and he told me that me to be confidence and everything is possible and after that I surprisingly driving very well and after few days I pass my driving test and i over the moon when i get my licence. I have nice experience with my uncle whenever we went outside he always prefer me for driving. I am so glad that I'm learn this skill now I'm good in driving
Well there are
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skills
which I want to learn like cooking and
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many
more which
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helps
me in several difficult situations and here I would like to talk about one of the
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skill
which I
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learnt
from my uncle and

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Skill
is
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driving
,
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some
moments when I faced difficulty in rainy days and due to that
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i
always choose bus in these days,
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i
don't like to travel by public transport
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because
of
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sofugation
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so
that's why I want to learn about this
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skills
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so
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i
can go anywhere regardless weather conditions and I remember that when I have completed my graduation, I search several
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driving
Institution and
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enquiry
there for
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driving
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but
due to
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covid-19
day all
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driving
school
were closed
for uncertain time period and after that I came back to home and
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discuss about it
with my
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parents and
they suggest me one of my uncle Mr
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Jagdish
, he is an Army person and after retirement he
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most of time
spent in a ground where he
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give
free coaching to poor
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Childrens
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and and
then I ask him to teach me
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driving and
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he he
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get
ready for this and
next
day I
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went with
them in the playground which was nearest to my home and his car is looking
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very
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good
and clean. He
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started
with about
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some
basic things about the car how to
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start
and which gear is useful for which situation and usage of Mirrors and then I
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start
the
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car and
he
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are
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told
me step by step and I follow as they teach me and every morning
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i
continue this routine and couple of months after I was
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very
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good
in
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driving
and one day he took me in a public place for that
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but
in this area
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i
felt
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very
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nervous and
he
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told
me that me to be confidence and everything is possible and after that I
surprisingly
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driving
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very
well and after few days I pass my
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driving
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test
and i over the moon when
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i
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get
my
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licence
. I have nice experience with my uncle whenever we went outside he always
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prefer
me for
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driving
. I am
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so
glad that I'm
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learn
this
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skill
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now
I'm
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good
in
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driving
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IELTS essay Describe a skill that you learned from older people.

Essay
  American English
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