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Describe a situation or a time when you helped someone

Describe a situation or a time when you helped someone yXLdl

I helped many people in my life, among all of them I remember one of my help. It was happening when I was going to college. I saw a vehicle accident in front of me. Uncle was suffering from illness Uncle was unknown to me. I helped him because He was suffering from illness. I couldn't say that. so I helped him. When I saw him at that time I don't know what to do but after that, I called ambulances and admitted him to the nearest hospital. I was with him that night and get food from outside for him. I also had called his son mobile and talked about all of the situations. after that, I took permission to leave his son on that night. I can't forget that day in my life because I saw a smile and happiness on uncle's face for me. That was an awesome moment for me. I remember that day every day in my life. Thank you

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helped
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many
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people
 in my life, among all of them I remember one of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. It was happening when I was going to college. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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illness


Uncle was unknown to me. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 He was suffering from illness. I couldn't say that. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 him.

When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 him at that time I don't know what to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after that, I called ambulances and admitted him to the nearest hospital. I was with him that night and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 food from outside for him. I also
 had called his son mobile and talked about Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 situations. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that, I took permission to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 his son on that night.

I can't forget that day in my life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a smile and happiness on uncle's face for me. That was an awesome moment for me. I remember that day every day in my life.

Thank you