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Some people spend too much money on marriges . What you think about it?

Some people spend too much money on marriges. What you think about it? AjrOx

Nowadays, spending too much money becomes a tend among people as they want to celebrate their events extraordinary. There have some positive as well as negatives of this trend. On the one hand, there are numbers of events as birthday parties, anniversaries and weddings on which people spend huge amount of money to make them memorable. Moreover, by spending extravagantly on these kinds of occasions people get a chance to meet their dear and love one's and also individuals have opportunity to celebrate their happiness which gives them sense of satisfaction along with this they can also show their wealth and status among others. On the other hand, this development has some negatives consequence for people as people waste lot of money when they organise these kind of function on high level. In addition to this, some middle class people also influenced and take loans to make their events extraordinary and sometime they trap into debt. by doing this people waste huge amount of food also. In conclusion, everyone has right to express their happiness in whatever manner they want to express but I belive that people have to spend money according to their budgets to maintain their finances appropriately.

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I belive
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people
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