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Describe a recent experience that makes you a strong candidate for this exchange programm.

Describe a recent experience that makes you a strong candidate for this exchange programm. oxLjg
Well, it is quite a challenging question for me due to the fact that I don't go out much from the place where I study. However, since I was a child I have a strong will and determination which in fact is one of the reasons why I am 1 out of many candidates who are worthy to participate in this pograamme. Furthermore my father left me and my mama when she was preganant with me, because of that action of his I grew up well educated, determined, confident and strong willed person.
Well, it is quite a challenging question for me due to the fact that I don't go out much from the place where I study.
However
, since I was a child I have a strong will and determination which in fact is one of the reasons why I am 1 out of
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many
candidates who are worthy to participate in this
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pograamme
.
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Furthermore
my father
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left
me and my
In some contexts, this is childish language. Consider alternatives.
mama
when she was
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preganant
with me,
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because
of that action of his I grew up
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
, determined, confident and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
strong willed
person.
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IELTS essay Describe a recent experience that makes you a strong candidate for this exchange programm.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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