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Describe a product from another country that you would like to buy

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Nowadays we live in global village where virtually every country in this world sale their products to each other. it is difficult to know which are the foreign products. I will try my best to find a foreign products which will ne very useful for me. so here I would like to talk about a product. Recenty i decided to bought a for me and my family therefore i do research for car so i decided to buy a japnese car which made by Japan company name nissan. moreover this car is newly launched in market further more in this car their are many nre features such as navigation system as well as this car is automatic and also fit in my budget ostensibly for purchase this car I save money since 2 years so I think I will definitely bought this car in next month additionally I want to buy this car from my home town because the showroom of thi car is located in my hometown as well as this car is very comfortable for me hence this is a foreign products that I want to buy in my future
Nowadays we
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virtually
every country in this world sale their
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products
to each other.
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it
is difficult to know which are the foreign
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products
. I will try my best to find a foreign
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products
which will
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ne
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very
useful for me.
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so
here I would like to talk about a
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product
.
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Recenty
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i
decided to
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bought
a for me and my family
therefore
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i
do research for
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car
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so
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i
decided to
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buy
a
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japnese
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car
which made by Japan
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company
name
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nissan
.
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moreover
this
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car
is
newly
launched in market
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more in this
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car
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their
are
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many
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nre
features such as navigation system
as well
as this
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car
is automatic and
also
fit in my budget
ostensibly
for
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purchase
this
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car
I save money since 2 years
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so
I
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think
I will definitely
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bought
this
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car
in
next
month
additionally
I want to
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buy
this
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car
from my home town
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because
the showroom of
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thi
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car
is located
in my hometown
as well
as this
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car
is
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very
comfortable for me
hence
this is a foreign
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products
that I want to
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buy
in my
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future

IELTS essay Describe a product from another country that you would like to buy

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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