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Describe a person's home you visited that you liked, but would not want to live in

Describe a person's home you visited that you liked, but would not want to live in Q8ajX

I’m really express with a home of my best friend. It located in centre of Vinh Phuc province. She invited me to attend the year-end. Although i was quite hectic schedule, but i tried to visit her once every year. The majority of buildings were designed according to a classic style with many homes lying next to each other. It’s a delightful place to visit in winter as it’s fully enveloped in snow. Moreover, being an excellent cook, my friend is good at cook some French cuisine. This place has a lot of trees. Everytime i come here, i feel fresh air and mild. Not only we go hang out but also adventure sports. We usually walking on nearby to hill. In spite of all this, I would not prefer live there permanently as i perceive the things to be good for temporary. Although i can share with my friend about life, i was born and bred in my countryside where have my parents, my jobs, . .

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