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Describe a person you met in primary school and impressed you alot.

Describe a person you met in primary school and impressed you alot. a7x8o
Well, primary school is part and parcel of every person's life. I was doing a lot of fun in my primary school. Here I would like talk about a person who impressed me alot in my school time. who is a Navjot kaur. when I was in 8th standard she came in my school as a mathematics teacher. she is 30 years old and looking very beautiful. she is very good person. Moreover, one day I was doing fun in my class. she came in my class and told me that you are good in study if you take seriously. Actually I was not serious in study. On that time she taught me valuable lessons and her works rapidly work on my mind. After a week I have keen interest in my study. I can say that because of her I am very good in study. Furthermore, she never put extra burden of home work instead of other teachers. she was very leinet me and other students. she understand the event person. A apart from this, she teach aging children and become more successful. More of people do work for money but she do work for her society. so, this is a person who met me in my primary school and impressed me alot.
Well, primary
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school
is part and parcel of every person's life. I was doing
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a lot of
fun in my primary
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school
. Here I would like talk about a
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person
who impressed me
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alot
in my
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school
time.
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who
is a
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Navjot
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kaur
.
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when
I was in 8th standard she came in my
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school
as a mathematics teacher.
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she
is 30 years
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old
and looking
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very
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beautiful
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she
is
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very
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good
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person
.
Moreover
, one day I was doing fun in my
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class
.
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she
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came in
my
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and
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told
me that you are
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good
in
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study
if you take
seriously
. Actually I was not serious in
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study
. On that time she taught me valuable lessons and her works
rapidly
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work
on my mind.
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a week I have keen interest in my
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. I can say that
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because
of her I am
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very
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in
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study
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, she never put extra burden of home
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work
instead
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she
was
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very
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me and other students.
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she
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apart from this, she
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teach
aging children and become more successful. More of
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people
do
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work
for money
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she
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do
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work
for her society.
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so
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person
who met me in my primary
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school
and impressed me
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alot
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IELTS essay Describe a person you met in primary school and impressed you alot.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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