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Describe a person who is close to you.

Describe a person who is close to you. BMQk6
Every people has a lovely person in his or her life, who is close to you. I was in ashock, when a lot of people were in my grandparent’s house. All of them are in a bad mood. Nobody spoke each other. All my relatives were crying and says some words misunderstandingly. I did not know what was happen at first. After some hours I released my lovely grandma was not live any more. There is not any word to say. She was kind and generous. She was not tall or short. Physically, she looked younger than most other women in their age. Her plump face was framed by a mass of wavy white hair and her sparkling blue eyes showed her humour and friendliness. She preffered wearing casual, comfortable clothes. Besides that, she was very intelligent person. She knew more things. She tought a lot of necessary things to me, which is important in my life. She teached me how to cook different kinds of food. She teached me some suras from Quron. In addition, she was horribly hardworking and polite. She did not say any bad words. She always says positive, good words, such as “uyingga bug’doy to’lgur. Boy bo’lgur, Makkaga imom bo’lgur. ” Taking every thing into account, this kind of people do not die. They live with us, in our heart. We did not forget. We always remember them.
Every
people
has
a lovely person in
his or her
life, who is close to you.

I was in
ashock
, when
a lot of
people
were in my grandparent’s
house
. All of them are in a
bad
mood. Nobody spoke each other. All my relatives were crying and says
some
words
misunderstandingly
. I did not know what was
happen
at
first
.
After
some
hours I released my lovely grandma was not
live
any more
. There is not any
word
to say.

She was kind and generous. She was not tall or short.
Physically
, she looked younger than most other women in their age. Her plump face
was framed
by a mass of wavy white hair and her sparkling blue eyes
showed
her
humour
and friendliness. She
preffered
wearing casual, comfortable clothes.

Besides
that, she was
very
intelligent person. She knew more things. She
tought
a lot of
necessary things to me, which is
important
in my life.
She
teached
me how to cook
different
kinds of food.
She
teached
me
some
suras
from
Quron
.

In addition
, she was
horribly
hardworking and polite. She did not say any
bad
words. She always says
positive
,
good
words, such as “
uyingga
bug’
doy
to’
lgur
. Boy
bo
lgur
,
Makkaga
imom
bo
lgur
. ”

Taking every thing into account, this kind of
people
do not
die
. They
live
with us, in our heart. We did not forget. We always remember them.
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IELTS essay Describe a person who is close to you.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
233 words
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