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Describe a person who has apologised to you

Describe a person who has apologised to you 5YXm

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think
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make
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some
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some
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sometimes
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but
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expect
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so
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car
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very
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but
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carefully
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however
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car
 from the real when he was stuck
 in a traffic jam and that cause him to hit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
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car
 in front of him he was feeling This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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guilty for
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car and
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get
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but
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very
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car
was damaged
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but
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that that
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but
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because
 of his son share impulses that I couldn't stay mad at him for a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
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so
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 day he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
went with
 me to the mechanic and luckily the damage was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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bad
 or expensive to fit he apologized again and assume that he will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be more vigilant in the future we are still
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good
 friends and I feel that receiving After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'maintain' is correct. If 'maintain' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a maintain
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make
 relationship stronger