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Describe a country where would like to work for a short time

Describe a country where would like to work for a short time EYOQ
well it is quite evident that people from developing countries are migrating to developed Nations due to work or study and here I would like to talk about a country name the stralia where I would like to go and work for a short time I explain my band briefly Australia is a developed nation many people go there for study and work there are all facilities are available in Australia such as well reputed universities jot job opportunities and so on I had completed my 12th class with 90% marks now I have joined the ice course in order to go abroad for my for the studies I have taken this course to breast up my English speaking skills and communication skillswork in a foreign country for a short time
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well
it is quite evident that
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people
from
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developing countries
are migrating to developed Nations due to work or study and here I would like to talk about a country name the
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stralia
where I would like to go and work for a short time I
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explain
my band
briefly
Australia is a developed nation
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many
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people
go there for study and work there are all facilities are available in Australia such
as well
reputed universities jot job opportunities and
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so
on I had completed my 12th
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class
with 90% marks
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now
I have
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joined
the ice course in order to go abroad for my for the studies I have taken this course to breast up my
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English speaking
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skills
and communication
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skillswork
in a foreign country for a short time
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IELTS essay Describe a country where would like to work for a short time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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