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Describe a period of time from your studies that was the most difficult for you so far

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I would like to talk about my last school year. I was a challenging year due to the outbreak of rhe disease and students were forced to study subjects online, yet neither teachers nor students were familiar with the distance learning methods. Also, i had to choose my major so i was so confused. Finally i studied hard and sometimes i had no time to relax but at least my efforts were not in vain and i passed all my exams well.

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IELTS essay Describe a period of time from your studies that was the most difficult for you so far

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American English

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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