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Describe a period of time from your studies that was the most difficult for you so far

Describe a period of time from your studies that was the most difficult for you so far 1mBVX
I would like to talk about my last school year. I was a challenging year due to the outbreak of rhe disease and students were forced to study subjects online, yet neither teachers nor students were familiar with the distance learning methods. Also, i had to choose my major so i was so confused. Finally i studied hard and sometimes i had no time to relax but at least my efforts were not in vain and i passed all my exams well.
I would like to talk about my last school year. I was a challenging year due to the outbreak of
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had to choose my major
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was
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confused.
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Finally
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studied
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sometimes
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had no time to relax
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at least my efforts were not in vain and
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passed all my exams well.
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IELTS essay Describe a period of time from your studies that was the most difficult for you so far

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1 paragraphs
82 words
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