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describe a party you enjoyed

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I am pleased to share with you my attendance at a recent party. That day was my friend Phuong's 18th birthday party. Phuong invited a group of close friends to a birthday party together. We gathered and bought a gift for her. We were surprised to see her cute birthday cake. The cake is painted with her image and there are 18 candles of different colors that have been lit around the cake. The whole house has been redecorated for the occasion. We sang a happy birthday song when Phuong cut the cake. We congratulate you and wish you an excellent exam coming up and a prosperous life in the future. We then tasted the cake and had a hearty feast, the food was pretty good. To me, this birthday party has a special meaning. It was a precious opportunity for us to meet each other, chat about daily life and share our childhood memories. This party left an indelible impression on my heart and to be honest, it is still fresh in my mind to this day.

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pleased
 to share with you my attendance at a recent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. That day was my friend Possible spelling mistake found.PhoneHungChungHuangPhonyPong
Phuong
's 18th birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
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Phuong
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party
 together. We gathered and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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cake
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
is painted
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different
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cake
. The whole This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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 for the occasion. We sang a happy birthday song when Possible spelling mistake found.PhoneHungChungHuangPhonyPong
Phuong
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cut
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
. We congratulate you and wish you an excellent exam coming up and a prosperous life in the future. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
 then tasted the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 and had a hearty feast, the food was pretty This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
.

To me, this birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 has a special meaning. It was a precious opportunity for us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 each other, chat about daily life and share our childhood memories. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 an indelible impression on my heart and to be honest, it is still
 fresh in my mind to this day. 