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Describe a newspaper or magazine you enjoy reading

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Well, I would like to talk about my newspaper enjoy reading for me. So I take away a newspaper which go back to school. I somethimes reading newspaper with my grandad. This is very enjoyable and spectacular. Iread newspaper which more news and interview because this interesting and unnatural the newspaper's take a lots of good I don't like reading the letters or adverts. I prefer reading the news and interviews and celebrities life or the news. I enjoy my grandad and read at home together. Next, we talk about the news and interesting interviews. It's very spectacular.
Well, I would like to talk about my
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newspaper
which go back to school. I
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somethimes
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reading
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newspaper
with my grandad. This is
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very
enjoyable and spectacular.
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Iread
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newspaper
which more
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news
and interview
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because
this interesting and unnatural the newspaper's take
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a lots
of
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good
I don't like
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reading
the letters or adverts. I prefer
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reading
the
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news
and interviews and celebrities life or the
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news
. I enjoy my grandad and read at home together.
Next
, we talk about the
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news
and interesting interviews. It's
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very
spectacular.

IELTS essay Describe a newspaper or magazine you enjoy reading

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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