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Describe a movie you love

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Tom and jerry is my favorite movie when I was young until now. It is a funny cartoon series. I don't remember the first time I saw this movie but I definitely saw it when I was very young. I think I've watched almost every episode of this series but there are a few episodes I've watched it again because it's very funny. The actors of this movie are a cat and a mouse called tom and jerry and their friends. The film tells about the thrilling chases of the two main actors, tom and ferry. With the intelligence and help of his friends, Jerry escaped from the chases of Tom. But there are episodes tom and jerry become best friends and help each other overcome difficulties. I really like this movie because it helps me relax after stressful working hours. If you want to find a funny movie about friendship, you definitely should not miss this movie. Watching it now for a good laughk
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cartoon series. I don't remember the
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. The actors of this
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are a cat and a mouse called tom and
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and their friends. The film
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about the thrilling chases of the two main actors, tom and ferry. With the intelligence and
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of his friends, Jerry escaped from the chases of Tom.
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there are episodes tom and
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become best friends and
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about friendship, you definitely should not
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IELTS essay Describe a movie you love

Essay
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2 paragraphs
164 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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