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Describe a journey that you had in the past

Describe a journey that you had in the past 30XWn
I want to talk about the first university trip that I had in my early days. The university provided train tickets for us because It was the safest and cheapest way, and We were going to Tehran to visit the annual book exhibition. I was with my classmates and friends during the journey, and we had lots of amazing times together. The good thing was apart from visiting the book exhibition. We went to some tourist places in the city like Milad tower that I hadn't seen before. Also, I became familiar with lots of my classmates, and we created closer relationships with each other. The bad thing was; unfortunately, we had a limited time, and couldn't stay more and visit more places. The trip was such an exciting experience because it was my first journey with friends, and we had many enjoyable moments that have remained in my memory.
I want to talk about the
first
university trip that I had in my early days. The university provided train tickets for us
because
It was the safest and cheapest way, and We were going to Tehran to visit the annual book exhibition. I was with my classmates and friends during the journey, and we had lots of amazing times together.

The
good
thing was apart from visiting the book exhibition. We went to
some
tourist places in the city like
Milad
tower that I hadn't
seen
before
.
Also
, I became familiar with lots of my classmates, and we created closer relationships with each other.

The
bad
thing was; unfortunately, we had a limited time, and couldn't stay more and visit more places.

The trip was such an exciting experience
because
it was my
first
journey with friends, and we had
many
enjoyable moments that have remained in my memory.
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IELTS essay Describe a journey that you had in the past

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
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