Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe a job you have now or had in the past.

Describe a job you have now or had in the past. OwgKy
This is a job that does not require skills suitable for students. So, I made it with my sister My main responsibility is to sell items such as decorative tables or second-hand clothing on Shopee. Whatever it is, I want to interact with customers who want to buy my product. I might set up a social media account to use as a platform to display and sell my items. Because I was still a child, my mother would not let me go out to work. Want to buy things for mom, assistant financial and business development skills. A part-time job honed my communication skills, and I am happy when I sell things. Before I decided to stop and focus on my final year of high school, I did online sales for nearly 1 year. I will never forget this part-time job because it gave me a rewarding experience.
This is a job that does not require
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
suitable for students.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, I made it with my sister My main responsibility is to sell items such as decorative tables or second-hand clothing on
Possible spelling mistake found.
Shopee
. Whatever it is, I want to interact with customers who want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
my product. I might set up a social media account to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
as a platform to display and sell my items.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I was
still
a child, my mother would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me go out to work. Want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
things for mom, assistant financial and business development
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. A part-time job honed my communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, and I am happy when I sell things.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
I decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
and focus on my final year of high school, I did online sales for
nearly
1 year. I will never forget this part-time job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it gave me a rewarding experience.

IELTS essay Describe a job you have now or had in the past.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Describe a job you have now or had in the past.