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Describe a company you want to work there.

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Nowadays, every people want to do job in very well known multinational company for earn name and fame. Here i am going talk about the company is the TATA group. Basically this institutes have co-ordination with other multi-national companies. It also have colaboration at international level. Furthermore, in this company approximately, more than 2 lakhs workers work their. The prime reason is that, they are not only providing life long security but also give some privacy and safety related to job. Everyone wants to do job entire life. It is very famous for making good and tremendous cars and also some households items. In this company, there are several people doing a job as a various professions such as, electrician, automobile engeineer, medical workers and so on. I really fill over the moon because of i am also part of this copmany and work do with loyalty and to be honest.
Nowadays, every
people
want to do
job
in
very
well known multinational
company
for earn name and fame. Here
i
am going talk about the
company
is the TATA group.
Basically
this
institutes have co-ordination with other multi-national
companies
. It
also
have
colaboration
at international level.
Furthermore
, in this
company
approximately, more than 2 lakhs workers work their. The prime reason is that, they are not
only
providing life long security
but
also
give
some
privacy and safety related to
job
. Everyone wants to do
job
entire life. It is
very
famous
for making
good
and tremendous cars and
also
some
households items. In this
company
, there are several
people
doing a
job
as a various
professions
such as, electrician, automobile
engeineer
, medical workers and
so
on. I
really
fill over the moon
because of i
am
also
part of this
copmany
and work do with loyalty and to be honest.
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IELTS essay Describe a company you want to work there.

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