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Describe a company you want to work there.

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Nowadays, every people want to do job in very well known multinational company for earn name and fame. Here i am going talk about the company is the TATA group. Basically this institutes have co-ordination with other multi-national companies. It also have colaboration at international level. Furthermore, in this company approximately, more than 2 lakhs workers work their. The prime reason is that, they are not only providing life long security but also give some privacy and safety related to job. Everyone wants to do job entire life. It is very famous for making good and tremendous cars and also some households items. In this company, there are several people doing a job as a various professions such as, electrician, automobile engeineer, medical workers and so on. I really fill over the moon because of i am also part of this copmany and work do with loyalty and to be honest.
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for earn name and fame. Here
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is the TATA group.
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institutes have co-ordination with other multi-national
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colaboration
at international level.
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approximately, more than 2 lakhs workers work their. The prime reason is that, they are not
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providing life long security
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privacy and safety related to
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entire life. It is
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for making
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households items. In this
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, there are several
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as a various
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IELTS essay Describe a company you want to work there.

Essay
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1 paragraphs
151 words
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